I think your paper is really good! It seems to flow well once reading it the first time through. I think all of your sections are good and it's structured the right way. I marked some grammatical things on your paper that could help it to be more concise. I don't know what pattern errors means so I'll say you don't have any and that those were good. Your paper seems long enough and the appendix is there too which is good! Make sure you try to find a few outside sources to back up your information (you could probably just add them into the introduction section) and then add a references page at the end with the appendix. APA style formatting is hard and I don't get it but I think you did good. The figures and explanations you used were really good too. I think overall your paper is really good and it comes off as clear and easy to read. good job!!!
I think your paper is really good! It seems to flow well once reading it the first time through. I think all of your sections are good and it's structured the right way. I marked some grammatical things on your paper that could help it to be more concise. I don't know what pattern errors means so I'll say you don't have any and that those were good. Your paper seems long enough and the appendix is there too which is good! Make sure you try to find a few outside sources to back up your information (you could probably just add them into the introduction section) and then add a references page at the end with the appendix. APA style formatting is hard and I don't get it but I think you did good.
ReplyDeleteThe figures and explanations you used were really good too. I think overall your paper is really good and it comes off as clear and easy to read. good job!!!